lunes, agosto 16, 2010

offering

few words translate
the hidden sun in your hands
carrying water

nature´s mirror rocking our voices
in the presence of fire

homeland
is the Earth speaking
in the most understandable
silence

2 comentarios:

Michael Montesano dijo...

What a beautiful line, 'the Earth speaking
in the most understandable
silence'
I have been writing similar poems, actually. Here is a line from an unfinished poem: "Mountains
Speaking not words but truths we've always felt,
Never voiced, kept sacred therein"
PS Jack Nason likes this poem because it has fire in it

Yllari Chaska dijo...

Thank you Michael. I want to read that unfinished poem. When we share poetry, we share our souls and all their colours and sounds.